I was looking for a story to read to my friends for camping and I came across this story that you wrote. I really enjoyed reading it but it was to long to read to my friends for around the fire. It is a great story to read on your own. You really need to keep writing! Oh and the ending really was fantastic.
Aug 01, 2010 Rating
More stuff by: Anonymous
That wasn't really scary... You could have add more interesting things to your story
Apr 24, 2010 Rating
Haha, wow. by: Raven
Thanks, guys. It means alot.
Oct 02, 2009 Rating
om my gosh!!! by: Anonymous
this story rocked! the ending was beyond great! i hoe i can read more awesome storys like this from you!!
Jul 20, 2009 Rating
Wow! by: Nicole
That was a really cool story! ur a great writer and keep writing stories like that!!!! NICE JOB!
Jul 16, 2009 Rating
Nice ending. by: I B
I always love it when the imaginary friend turns out to be real.
Jul 14, 2009 Rating
SORRY by: Vanessa
its not that i didnt like this story its just that i dont get this story i dont understand it much but if i knew what it meant i KNOW i would have given u more stars so plz chill dont think ur a bad writer.
Jul 01, 2009 Rating
wow that's creepy! by: Anonymous
wow, that was scary , cooool story!!!!
Nov 28, 2008 Rating
Great story by: Zoe
That was an awesome story Raven. I loved it! It got me so scared! You're a great story writer, please write more! :)
