One Late Night

by Alefia Kothambawala


One late night, a husband and wife were walking home from a party. There were said to be murders at that part of town.


Suddenly, the wife heard footsteps coming from behind. When she looked back nothing was there. She turned around and the husband was gone. By then, she was really frightened and ran all the way home.

When she got to her mansion, she saw her husband's body hanging from a tree. His face was covered in blood. On the bark of the tree in bold red letters there were words that said "Your next".

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Dec 14, 2010
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Blech.
by: Me

Predictable, no real plot. How'd he know where she lived? Explain more.

Nov 26, 2010
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pretty good
by: Anonymous

It was pretty good could have been longer

Aug 06, 2009
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Nice.
by: ID

Nice one anonymous. (High five)

Apr 17, 2008
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What?
by: Anonymous

So how did the husband get killed before the wife when they were walking home together? It doesn't make sense and the story had no plot.

You might have better luck just writing this: "Two people were walking home. One got murdered. The other one died too. The end."

At least that made some sense.

Jan 10, 2008
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love title
by: Anonymous

kinda cheesy but liked the end

Jan 08, 2008
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Nothing that day but grave
by: Anonymous

NOTHING BUT GRAVE!!???

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