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One Late Night

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Dec 14, 2010
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star 		Blech.
by: Me

Predictable, no real plot. How'd he know where she lived? Explain more.
Nov 26, 2010
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starstarstarstar 		pretty good
by: Anonymous

It was pretty good could have been longer
Aug 06, 2009
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star 		Nice.
by: ID

Nice one anonymous. (High five)
Apr 17, 2008
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star 		What?
by: Anonymous

So how did the husband get killed before the wife when they were walking home together? It doesn't make sense and the story had no plot.

You might have better luck just writing this: "Two people were walking home. One got murdered. The other one died too. The end."

At least that made some sense.
Jan 10, 2008
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starstarstar 		love title
by: Anonymous

kinda cheesy but liked the end
Jan 08, 2008
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starstarstarstarstar 		Nothing that day but grave
by: Anonymous

NOTHING BUT GRAVE!!???

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