Yah Vanessa is right. The ghost is the only scary thing about the WHOLE story. I like stories with suspence. u need more suspence!!!!! Good job anyway!
Jul 14, 2009 Rating
yah by: Vanessa
yah is this true? the women was probably a ghost. thats actully the ONLY scary ting in ur story.
Mar 04, 2009 Rating
WOW by: Anonymous
i think this story is very well written!!! One question though..... is this true?