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Jun 07, 2008
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Sorry it took so long
by: PhilG (your webmaster)

Sorry it took so long to publish. I was torn. I really enjoyed the way you constructed your thoughts. The picture was a little much for my audience, so I removed it. This is intended for those under 16 after-all.

I removed a few colourful phrases, and against my better judgment and policies, left in the few religious references. You weren't preaching yourself.

Your pain really came through. Well done.

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