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Nov 28, 2011
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awesome
by: andrea

wow really good loved how you made the man have an accent in the dialogue very well put together:)

Dec 21, 2010
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omg
by: Ally

it was so awsome and creppy .u r a gifted athur

Nov 15, 2010
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Thank you!
by: Anna

Thank you Jamie and Carrie! Carrie, I'll read your story right away and comment :) THANK YOU FOR YOUR SUPPORT!!!!!

Oct 31, 2010
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Awesome
by: Carrie

Amazing executed. Best story I've read.

Read minee -- Twisted.. Coz if you can write stories like that. You should be a writer.. and I want advice =P xx

Sep 29, 2010
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awesome 5 stars!!
by: Jamie

this is my fave. .its really long and really creepy. shiverssss

Jun 05, 2011
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pretty good i guess
by: Bob

Your story was pretty good in my opinion. You should make more of them like this. I cant wait to read them!

Dec 08, 2011
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Love your story
by: cody's girl

I really love your story but I didn't get the ending. Please be more descriptive, but I love it. You are a great author.

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