I slept on the top bed at my cousin's house... because of that story!
Oct 29, 2010 Rating
Wow *clap* *clap* by: Hey
That was scary story! Right for halloween! the picture is scary though....but good!
Jul 16, 2009 Rating
Nice by: I D
Like Steph said, the ending seemed a little rushed. It was wonderfully creepy although I suggest that if you get the chance to re-write this story at any time you make it so that the murderer is attached somehow to the bed. You know , haunting , possesion etc...
Jul 05, 2009 Rating
wow... by: Marie
whoa that was crazy... i cant stop shaking...very good!
Mar 28, 2009 Rating
Wowee by: Anonymous
Man I am so glad I'm an only child. I have NEVER thought bunk beds are dangerous lol.
Dec 28, 2008 Rating
good work! by: Steph
Good story. The ending was clear and quite good but a little bit rushed. You had all this great run up and then kind of hurried through it. I think someimes it is good but in this case it just didn't work for me.
May 05, 2008 Rating
Loved every word by: Fan Number One
I am never going to have any sleep from now on, it totally made me shiver!
May 04, 2008 Rating
From Nikita by: Anonymous
The way you've written is awesome. A good story but the ending is not clear, quite vague. Could you post your comments for my story? It is "the night at the railway station"
