Never seen again

by Laila A.
(Maryland)

Never seen again


Once upon a time there was a small town known as Amenit. The thing about this town was that there were recent ghost sightings. In the fall a while after 1978 the towns people of Amenit complained about a powerful ghost that had been coming every full moon to kidnap people. The town was terrified.

There were three friends Harry, Hayden, and Hailey. They were very clever, sneaky children. They were great friends and they had a detective service. One day they went out looking for clues until they ran into somebody. “Hello children,” the person said, “I’m Anita.” After that day, the children were never seen again.

Now you probably thought that those children were going to be the heroes, but they’re unfortunately not, back to the story. There was a boy who claims he is not scared of any ghost so he goes along the forbidden path. Then he ran into someone. “Hello, I’m Anita,” the person said. That boy was never seen again.

I gotcha, unfortunately that boy was gone too, but there was the twin jewel slaves. They were Angel and Alan. They had the ghost mineral, the most powerful jewel in history. One day when they were sleeping they woke to hear something from the corner. “You two have the most powerful stone in history. Use it to vanquish the horrible ghost Anita.” “Who is this?” asked Angel. “Those who are lost.” The twins soon fell asleep.

“Good morning.” The voice they heard the previous night said. “Make sure you come tonight. There is a new moon, Anita leaves to the moon charge her powers.”

“We’ll make sure we come.” Alan said.

At 12:37 am they left to go to the henis hill to defeat the ghost. They found the lost people and released them out of the hooks. “Are you alright?” Angel asked. Then suddenly, a shadow crept above them “Now they are,” the ghost said.

“Now my darling children you either stay with me and rule the world or be hanged by your death.”
“Neither.” Alan said.

“Yeah” Exclaimed Angel. “Your powers are weak. We have a bigger soul and that’s what makes us strong.”

Then Angel threw the jewel at Anita. “No! I have been defeated.” The ghost got sucked into the jewel. Alan broke it so Anita would have no chance of getting out. Anita was never seen again.

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Oct 02, 2009
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eew
by: Anonymous

this story is horrible, sorry. work way harder and try to actually make it scary next time...

Mar 28, 2008
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So sweet
by: thesameP

This is like the best story ever. I just want to say you rule girl.

Dec 22, 2007
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Wow
by: Anonymous

Interesting!!!!!!!
Please read this. It is awesome. Like it, or there's something wrong with you.

Dec 07, 2007
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Why?
by: Anonymous

Why would you write this scooby doo knock off???

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