It would have been good to find out what happened. I mean would you have heard the glass door slide across, and if that was me, if i saw a siloette( sorry about the spelling) of a man, i would have turned around! Apart from that though i thought it was scary, and a great story :D
Dec 04, 2010 Rating
scary by: Anonymous
man that was scary
Apr 22, 2011 Rating
disapointed by: Anonymous
i wanted to know what happened! how did the guy get in? i was confusing. i wish there was more. the rest of it was really good. keep writing
