dayum...tjhis is creepy because i had a dream about this like in 2001 when i was 4...you wrote about it..and the creepiest thing is..this had actually happened to me...when i was 6..this happened..except the murderer was my dad..he is in a phsycotic ward....and in jail..this is weird e-mail me at mallory-rose (at) comcast.net
Jul 16, 2009 Rating
what? by: Vanessa
yea im a lil bit confused too
Jul 15, 2009 Rating
Terrific by: Anonymous
THAT WAS ONE OF THE BEST i'VE HEARD ONE THiS SiTE!
Jul 04, 2009 Rating
? by: The BEST fan of scary stories!
That was really good but i was a little confused at the end. Great job! :-)
Jun 08, 2009 Rating
hi by: Anonymous
im just a little conufsed....did jo die????
Apr 17, 2009 Rating
cool story by: tiara
this was good heack it was awesome!!! when u get the chance take a look at my story either the t.v screen and skinned alive...
Mar 04, 2009 Rating
Amazing by: Anna
That was amazing I heard that story it's my fave thanx keep writing !!! :)
Feb 07, 2009 Rating
Wow by: Anonymous
Wow tht was really good. I had to read it twice. I really liked the idea of the girl being the murderer. I did not see that coming :)
Jan 31, 2009 Rating
The killer by: biggest fan of scary stories
That was so freaky I sat there reading it with my hands over my eyes peeping through the gaps in my fingers. It's great at the end how you got me thinking what is she gonna do about it? Then I realise as I read the end you're just thinking about it. I like how you said his blue eyes were in the back of his head or something. If any one reads this please tell me another spooky story website (althoug this is by far the best one) LOL GTG c ya l8er
Jan 15, 2009 Rating
Wow!!!! by: Anonymous
Oh my gosh! Your story left me speechless. You should definitely write a book. I'm a big fan! How did you come up with such a cool story? I really hope it's not true though.
Oct 26, 2008 Rating
That was BRILLIANT by: LiVeS tO rEaD
Wow! Words just cannot describe how much I love it!
Oct 24, 2008 Rating
I loved it! by: Anonymous
It was the perfect story and I loved the ending. You should definitely make a book. I would buy it. I was so in to it. My heart was beating faster and faster! The phone rang, and I didn't even pick it up! My mom came home from work and I didn't even say hello! Really it was amazing! I just love you and I don't even know you! It was awesome.
Oct 13, 2008 Rating
FAB U LUS by: Anonymous
That's so good! You should elongate it and write your own book, I would totally buy it!
Oct 10, 2008 Rating
eeeek! by: iloveericccccccc
That was pretty good!
I love how you make the girl seem insane. And she's like 'oh no big deal, it's happened before'. It was very good and detailed too. Nice work!
Aug 06, 2008 Rating
Cool by: Anonymous
I wouldn't think that someone would publish such a great story on this kind of site. You SHOULD write your own book or something.
Aug 03, 2008 Rating
Wow by: Anonymous
I so totally didn't think that the killer would be you! I hope this isn't a true story. You're really good at writing. You should publish your own novel and become my literacy hero! Great short story, the best yet on the site.
