Oh my gosh the end was RUINED! That girl should hav DIED or something. That would of been even better! Why did u let her get away with it! (the main character is a girl right?)
Not including that, the story was pretty good!
I did a 4 star rating only cause the ending was RUINED!;)
Oct 22, 2008 Rating
What? by: Anonymous
Way too scary! You never know if a little kid is reading this. When I saw the picture I almost jumped out my seat. Come on, not a lot of blood please, but it is great to tell at Holleween.