Not bad mabey a bit short...yes i do know its a short story but this one was a little to short for my liking. You couldnt really understand the charictors of the story but over all i think it was good mabey a bit more deatail next tim(just a thought). P.S. Not being mean just trying to help your writing x :)
Oct 02, 2009 Rating
eh.. by: Anonymous
this story really sucked and bone dry killer was just as bad...sorry but thats the truth...
Aug 03, 2009 Rating
heyy by: Anonymous
ya i read bone dry killer.....let me tell you that story scared me so bad i had to sleep in my parents bed for a few weeks......and im 12!!!! lol i really love your stories and i really hope you write more!
Jun 07, 2009 Rating
good! by: Anna
good story Vic!!!! that is actually kinda creepy.....cuz i would sooo totally hate that(being stuck in a movie i mean.)
Apr 01, 2009 Rating
Hi... by: Victoria (the author)
You can read Bone Dry killer and Bloody Barbie, also by me. They both have 5 stars! I am currently writing a REALLY funny novel. Have you read the book diary of a wimpy kid? It's kind of like that! Maybe someone will publish it! :)
