I think you might have found one of your purposes' in life Ari -- A WRITER! What a wonderful and engaging short! I couldn't wait to get to the end to see just how cock-a-doodle-do came to be the rooster's call. That's the mark of a good story.
Sep 06, 2007 Rating
OMG! by: Anonymous
so cool!
Aug 24, 2007 Rating
A little polished by: Kate S.
This story doesn't sound like it came from a 9 year old. Either it was re-written by a parent or Ari is a real budding talent.
