Hide And Go Seek

by Sophie
(Toronto, Ontario, Canada)

My closet

My closet

It was the beginning of March Break and I was ready to enjoy it. I had no school and I was free to do anything I wanted. Living with me, were these kids who were sort of my cousins. There were two of them... a boy named Jake and a little girl named Jenny.

Now, little Jenny here just loved to play hide and go seek. She especially loved the hiding part. So I wasn't at all surprised when Jenny tugged my arm one day and said, "Hide and go seek!"

Normally, I wouldn't waste my time on playing a childish game, but today I felt great so I said to myself, why not? and soon I was counting to 20...

I had found everyone except for Jenny, and I was certain that I heard her voice in the closet. I opened it but found no one there. Then I heard her voice again so I decided to take a closer look, but still she wasn't there.

Finally, I gave up and left the room.

When I got to the living room I was shocked to see Jenny sitting on the sofa watching TV. I stared at her and said, "Weren't you hiding in the closet?" Jenny stared up at me with a strange expression on her face. "No, I was hiding in the basement, but I got bored so I came out."

As everyone watched TV I sat alone in my room staring at my closet, and shaking my head. Who made that voice..? I wondered.

I didn't even notice the closet door open...

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Aug 04, 2009
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good story but confusing
by: Emily

it was getting scary until the end, i got confused. why was the door open? what do you meen by you heard her voice in the closet and she wasnt there? those questions leave the story unscary and unfinished. but good try!

Jun 05, 2009
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:)
by: Anonymous

yay sophie! good story!

Apr 07, 2009
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Good Job
by: Anonymous

You used the element of surprize well in this story. Kudos to you!

Dec 21, 2008
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=)
by: Tasia

I find that most stories on here seem very immature....but i liked this one it keeps me guessing... good job

Oct 24, 2008
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Cool
by: Anonymous

I thought that this story was really cool, and scary.

Apr 24, 2008
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Loved it
by: Anonymous

I loved it. I hope that you make more scary stories.

Apr 24, 2008
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I loved it!
by: Anonymous

I thought that this story was very good. I loved this story!

Apr 24, 2008
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Spooky
by: Anonymous

That's creepy!

Apr 24, 2008
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The missing girl
by: Anonymous

Who do you think was making that sound in the closet? Was it Jake or was it someone else?

Apr 24, 2008
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Oh my
by: Anonymous

This story was really cool but I want to know what happens after the closet door opens.

Apr 09, 2008
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"WOW !"
by: skull

I actually thought it was kind of scary. I liked it.

Apr 02, 2008
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huh?
by: Anonymous

I don't understand the end of this story what does it mean?

Mar 12, 2008
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Dude
by: Anonymous

What happens after the closet door open? Who was it in the closet? Was it a ghost, or was she hearing things?

Webmaster: Hey Dude, stories don't always provide all of the answers. That's what your imagination is for.

Mar 09, 2008
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Love it
by: Anonymous

I think it should be 5 stars! Sophie's a good friend of mine and she is GREAT at writing.

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