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Hide And Go Seek

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Aug 04, 2009
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good story but confusing
by: Emily

it was getting scary until the end, i got confused. why was the door open? what do you meen by you heard her voice in the closet and she wasnt there? those questions leave the story unscary and unfinished. but good try!

Jun 05, 2009
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:)
by: Anonymous

yay sophie! good story!

Apr 07, 2009
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Good Job
by: Anonymous

You used the element of surprize well in this story. Kudos to you!

Dec 21, 2008
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=)
by: Tasia

I find that most stories on here seem very immature....but i liked this one it keeps me guessing... good job

Oct 24, 2008
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Cool
by: Anonymous

I thought that this story was really cool, and scary.

Apr 24, 2008
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Loved it
by: Anonymous

I loved it. I hope that you make more scary stories.

Apr 24, 2008
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I loved it!
by: Anonymous

I thought that this story was very good. I loved this story!

Apr 24, 2008
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Spooky
by: Anonymous

That's creepy!

Apr 24, 2008
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The missing girl
by: Anonymous

Who do you think was making that sound in the closet? Was it Jake or was it someone else?

Apr 24, 2008
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Oh my
by: Anonymous

This story was really cool but I want to know what happens after the closet door opens.

Apr 09, 2008
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"WOW !"
by: skull

I actually thought it was kind of scary. I liked it.

Apr 02, 2008
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huh?
by: Anonymous

I don't understand the end of this story what does it mean?

Mar 12, 2008
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Dude
by: Anonymous

What happens after the closet door open? Who was it in the closet? Was it a ghost, or was she hearing things?

Webmaster: Hey Dude, stories don't always provide all of the answers. That's what your imagination is for.

Mar 09, 2008
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Love it
by: Anonymous

I think it should be 5 stars! Sophie's a good friend of mine and she is GREAT at writing.

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