it was getting scary until the end, i got confused. why was the door open? what do you meen by you heard her voice in the closet and she wasnt there? those questions leave the story unscary and unfinished. but good try!
Jun 05, 2009 Rating
:) by: Anonymous
yay sophie! good story!
Apr 07, 2009 Rating
Good Job by: Anonymous
You used the element of surprize well in this story. Kudos to you!
Dec 21, 2008 Rating
=) by: Tasia
I find that most stories on here seem very immature....but i liked this one it keeps me guessing... good job
Oct 24, 2008 Rating
Cool by: Anonymous
I thought that this story was really cool, and scary.
Apr 24, 2008 Rating
Loved it by: Anonymous
I loved it. I hope that you make more scary stories.
Apr 24, 2008 Rating
I loved it! by: Anonymous
I thought that this story was very good. I loved this story!
Apr 24, 2008 Rating
Spooky by: Anonymous
That's creepy!
Apr 24, 2008 Rating
The missing girl by: Anonymous
Who do you think was making that sound in the closet? Was it Jake or was it someone else?
Apr 24, 2008 Rating
Oh my by: Anonymous
This story was really cool but I want to know what happens after the closet door opens.
Apr 09, 2008 Rating
"WOW !" by: skull
I actually thought it was kind of scary. I liked it.
Apr 02, 2008 Rating
huh? by: Anonymous
I don't understand the end of this story what does it mean?
Mar 12, 2008 Rating
Dude by: Anonymous
What happens after the closet door open? Who was it in the closet? Was it a ghost, or was she hearing things?
Webmaster: Hey Dude, stories don't always provide all of the answers. That's what your imagination is for.
Mar 09, 2008 Rating
Love it by: Anonymous
I think it should be 5 stars! Sophie's a good friend of mine and she is GREAT at writing.
