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Aug 25, 2008
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Wow
by: Anonymous

I loved you story!
Please carry on...

Apr 14, 2008
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It was OK
by: Anonymous

Freakist. Story.Ever. :|
Although the whole parents saying "oh get out of the house blah blah blah" kinda takes away from it.
But still, 5 stars.

Mar 03, 2008
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Scarey!!! lol
by: Laura x

I Love This Story And I Have Heard Many Versions Of It But No Matter How Many Times I Hear It...

It Still Freaks Me Out...

But I Have Given It Five Stars Cus I Think Its Scary

P.S:- I Am Also Scared Of Clowns...Since I Was Little..But I Dont Think The Title Is Right..

Laura x


Mar 02, 2008
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Great
by: Angie

I'm not scared of clowns, but this short story gave me chills and makes a great story for a campfire! Creative and enjoyed the mysterious trail left for the readers imagination at the end. Well done.

Feb 22, 2008
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ahh!!
by: Anonymous

Ha ha I actually turned around a couple times because was checking if the clown was behind me!!! Loved it!!

Feb 24, 2008
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I like it
by: Anonymous

Very scary indeed

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