Help!

by Jessica
(Tasmania)

It won't do you any good

It won't do you any good

There was once a boy he was ten. He walked to a shop and saw the shop keeper dead on the floor with a knife in his back. He then went running out of the shop and was asking for help.

When he was walking home he realised that a guy was following him so he got even more scared and ran home. He got inside and slammed the door shut tight and after a couple of minutes he heard the door bell ring and he answered the door.

The man that had been following him was at the door and the last word from the boy was help.

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Apr 17, 2008
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Nice one kid
by: Anonymous

It's obvious the person who rated this 5 stars is the writer. No one in their right mind could possibly rate this story 5 stars.

I'm being nice just rating it 1 star. The story is so stupid, you're better off writing:

"There was a boy. He went home and was killed. The end."

Nice job kid.

Mar 28, 2008
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Why?
by: Anonymous

Is there a reason that this is five stars? I missed it.

Jan 28, 2008
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Good
by: Anonymous

Very good

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