Its was cool but like i didn't find it scary. Sorry. I am quite hard to scare!! x
Jul 14, 2010 Rating
Loved it by: alison :)
I loved this story its sooo good lol you should write more :)
Feb 25, 2010 Rating
really good by: Anonymous
that story was sooo good yet sooo sad WRITE MORE
Oct 01, 2009 Rating
Awww by: Anonymous
this story was so sad and amazing. it wasn't scary but still an awesome story!
Aug 11, 2009 Rating
:'( by: Anonymous
I've read this story before, but I read it again today, and I fully started sobbing. That is just so sad!
Jul 24, 2009 Rating
daum by: sugarlips
I love this story...its so awesome and so sad you should make a second part o i have a question was it based on a true story or did you make it up?
Jul 09, 2009 Rating
Wow! by: Anonymous
That was an awesome story! It really freaked me out! Great job! PLEASE write more I will definitely read them!
Jul 04, 2009 Rating
geez! by: Marie
that was really good. amazing really! :)
Jun 29, 2009 Rating
Terrific by: perycyjacksonfan#458
This story is so awesome!!! I LOVE it!
Jun 18, 2009 Rating
whoaaaaaaaaaaaa by: Anonymous
whoa this story is like sooo awsome!!
Jun 11, 2009 Rating
ummm laila by: Anonymous
laila, im pretty sure lauras dead forever....
May 28, 2009 Rating
rrg by: Anonymous
omg those parents are keyed up
Apr 04, 2009 Rating
Wow by: Anna
Wow. Wow, wow, wow, wow, wow!!! I thought I wrote great stories!!!! This is possibly the best story on here!!! I was shocked when Laura killed herself, and I was appalled by the parents lack of love towards their children. This is an amazing story!!! I hung onto every word of it!!! If you'd like to read my stories, I wrote Room 113, Rosie, the Gate and a few more...You don't have to read them if you don't want to. Well, anyways, I thought your story took alot of thought and care and I really enjoyed it!!! Thank you!!!! PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Feb 03, 2009 Rating
So good! by: Diana
That was a really good story.
It was so sad. One sister sacrified herself to save her sister... Awww! Good Job!
Jan 28, 2008 Rating
This was a sad story by: Anonymous
This was a sad story
Jan 01, 2008 Rating
Good by: Anonymous
Good
Nov 17, 2007 Rating
So sad by: Laila
Was laura dead forever?
Nov 04, 2007 Rating
Thats Good!! by: Anonymous
That was so freaky but was really really good, did you make that up!!! How old are you because you are really good!!! Left me guessing to the end!!!
Nov 01, 2007 Rating
Great Job!!! :) by: Anonymous
This story is not really scary, but very intresting!!!:)
Oct 30, 2007 Rating
hmmm... by: Anonymous
Lacked momentum, and somewhat predictable, but otherwise, spooky.
Oct 15, 2007 Rating
Fresh and really creepy by: Robert
What a messed up family. Really made the story creepy.
Oct 06, 2007 Rating
A real page turner by: Anonymous
This was really captivating. I was drawn deeper and deeper into the story and my anticipation of the ending grew stronger and stronger.
I had hoped for more of a surprise at the end, but overall the story is a must read.
