that was super scary. u should write a book like that but dont give it to little kids.
May 22, 2010 Rating
wow by: Anonymous
wow u rock
Dec 27, 2009 Rating
Holy cow that was amazingly creepy by: scary story lover
I have heard many versions of a story like this but by far yours was the best I loved every moment of it espeacaily the WE(bewar)e thing. Very well written have you every thought of writting a book a scary one at that? Because you should and if it gets published I would for sure read it. Again very well written kepp it up and you will go far. :D
From, A fellow scary story writter
Dec 23, 2009 Rating
wow by: homechick
this story was pretty down...r u gonna continue it
Dec 23, 2009 Rating
good buildup! by: Anonymous
That was awesome. The story held me in suspense. And then, even when I knew "the doll did it", you threw in the twist. The ending was original, surprising, and murderously quick.
Dec 21, 2009 Rating
great by: Anonymous
IT WAS REALLY CREEPY and good. keep at it
Dec 21, 2009 Rating
great by: Anonymous
wow that was the best story here, by far. you really do desurve 5 stars! KEEP WRITING.
Dec 21, 2009 Rating
Thanks by: sky B
Thanks! I worked really hard on it, but i do think i could have done better. Im only in eight grade, so there should be more to come. Thanks for commenting P.S. don't think im shallow for rating my own story 5 stars -Thanks
Dec 18, 2009 Rating
Wow by: Anonymous
WoW that was pritty scary. Like very scary. Awsome job!
Dec 12, 2009 Rating
That was reely creepy... by: Anonymous
That was really creepy...and i loved every second of it. keep writing
