Sorry but in my opinion this story could have been a lot better because, come on you have seen a dead person but nobody believes you. Sorry Could have been a lot better Love Megan
Jul 09, 2009 Rating
cool by: Nicole
That was scary! Good job but i do NOT believe it is true!!!!!!!!!!!! I think its fake! :-)
May 25, 2009 Rating
daaaaum by: gangstagirl
that was scary man seriously especially the feet part i dont know what i would of done i would probably still be standing there by now
Apr 26, 2009 Rating
Thrilling by: karina
But still...It sounds fake, but kind of thrilling. Good try though!
Jan 11, 2009 Rating
OMYGOSH by: a fellow story writer on this site
Hey! I loved this story, was so freaky! How'd you..I mean... omygosh is this true? I would have been so scared I loved it man this story rox...but I'm so not going to open doors by myself anymore.
Jan 10, 2009 Rating
Great Story M8 by: connor g
I enjoyed it a lot I hope it wasn't real but still good job!
