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May 17, 2009
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how lame this was so very stupied
by: sasha

that wasnt scary at all if u ask me it was the stupiedist one i ever read 'spinned in the depth of hell' or something like that well u could of discripted more like what she looked like what type of shoes she was wering ,if she had friends, um what did hell look like, or u could of done it in her point of view like if she was talking to her mom say how she felt about it was she yelling or happy because then her mom would of guessed that she was going to go





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that story was just not good or discripted hope ur not plnning to be a book writer someday because then id never resd ur books ever.

Mar 17, 2009
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scary
by: Anonymous

it was a quite scary but not scary enough.

Mar 12, 2009
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Cool!
by: Anonymous

That is a really cool story i didn't get it at first but now i totally understand. Have u made anymore stories.

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