ha! i was reading this to my mom and i saw the part with the dog eyes staring at you and i pretened to gag and my mom said something and i got scared and screamed at her...... she thinks im weird ..... awesome story though!!!!!!! :)
Jun 20, 2010 Rating
huh by: Anonymous
im curious but if you were in a coffin how could you write the story besies that great story
Dec 09, 2009 Rating
AWESOME by: Anonymous
This is the awesomest story ever!
Oct 26, 2009 Rating
wow by: storie
wow i loved it the dog part creeped me out
Oct 17, 2009 Rating
hmmm by: Anonymous
didnt really make sense
Oct 15, 2009 Rating
wow by: Anonymous
being STUCK INSIDE SOMETHING IS MY WORST NIGHTMARE!!! sorry....lol I was just like, o gosh o no...lol but u did a great job on your story!!! what killed her though? her dog? sorry im clueless.
Oct 11, 2009 Rating
awesome by: Anonymous
awesome story!!!!! it is one of the best i have read EVER!!! you did an awesome job!
