I saw your comment at that scary story named "bella", then I came here to check your story. great thing to do!' thats realy cool! great job!
Jul 16, 2009 Rating
Wow! by: Anonymous
That is a really great story! luuuuv it! I could of guessed it without the 'i was next'. luv the title and everything about it! more!!!! :)
Jul 05, 2009 Rating
that was awesome! by: Marie
like the title says it was awesome! keep writing :)
Jan 18, 2009 Rating
Hey by: awesome daniel =) luv ya
Hey this was an awesome story good for you... to the person who just said, "I dont think you should have put "and i was next" is wrong. I liked that part. Also its the authors story. Just enjoy it your not a publisher or whatever.
Dec 29, 2008 Rating
Well done by: Steph
Really good story congrats, however I think to make it a little better you shouldn't have included 'and I was next'. I found it more creepy just reading it and guessing it for myself. Good story.
Jun 11, 2008 Rating
Gee by: Anonymous
This is a very weird, scary story. I Love it! It's very interesting. More, more, more.
