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Jul 20, 2009
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by: Suzy the author for clovis

Lol im sorry guys i didnt put in what did come up, because i till this day dont know and im turnin 21 i wrote this story a while back and the reminder still sends chills up my spine >_<. But like i said im not sure what came up the stairs, and im not a person to really experience anything freaky but this inciddent scared me lol ... and thanks guys for reading my story and commenting ^_^ Have a great day! Suzy

Jul 20, 2009
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by: SpellChecker

There were lots of spelling mistakes and u NEED 2 CAPITALIZE ur 'I's!

As 4 the story, it wasnt that scary... I also wanted 2 know who came up the stairs if it wasnt the dogs!
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I appreciate your attention to detail SpellChecker, but if you are going to provide constructive criticism, you will need to guide by example.

you not u
your not ur
for not 4
wasn't not wasnt
to not 2

I will need your help in the months to come if you are up to the task. The site will be changing.

PhilG

Nov 08, 2008
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Creepy
by: Anonymous

That's creepy. It is, and let me tell you why.
-both your dogs were locked and you knew it
-the "dog" you said was coming up the stairs was long and heavy. Well obviously you know what your dogs sound like coming up the stairs, and you obviously said.
-they were still locked in their cages. You did not tell us if they could get out or not.
and it kinda creeps me out, because I live in the basement, and to think of something slow, long and heavy coming up would scare me pantless.

Nov 28, 2007
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What the heck?
by: Taterchick27

You never said who was coming up the stairs, it apparently couldn't have been the dogs, since you put them in cages! I mean how rude is that???

Nov 19, 2007
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Cool
by: Daniella

HA HA HA I remember you told me this story.. Dude, your house is scary. Good story!

Nov 16, 2007
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gotta do clowns
by: emily

Sure... not that scary. But don't take this seriously, cause almost nothing scares me except clowns.

Nov 16, 2007
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spooky
by: Anonymous

freaky mabey it was the wind

Nov 16, 2007
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Get the bad guy Clovis, get the bad guy!
by: Rick James B@#$&

let me get this straight your 19 and you ask your parents to sleep with their door open to their room..."hhmmmm your funny" (in a midget voice)!
second just be glad you weren't the one that was sleeping on the couch that night without no doors to get eaten first LIKE ME!!!
you nukka's just spooked me then went to bed BOGUS!!!


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