great, freaky story but needs more detail! you have to build up suspence befor you get to the killing! :]
Sep 21, 2009 Rating
Excuse me! by: Jessica W
Whoever this "jessica" is who said her story had a twist on the end saying "Click" if you are trying to say you wrote the story called "wrong number" THAT WAS ACTUALLY MINE! I WROTE THAT STORY WITH THAT TURN OF EVENT! HOW DARE YOU CLAIM MY WORK AS YOUR OWN! P.S if you are TRULY talking of a different story I will apologies, but I HATE people who pass of my work as theirs!
******************************** Can someone confirm this?
Phil G
May 22, 2009 Rating
ALRIGHT by: Anonymous
i have to admit it as pretty scary and such
Feb 20, 2009 Rating
Awesome by: Anonymous
That was very cool! Chills were running up and down my spine!
Feb 01, 2009 Rating
Huh? by: jessica
I guess it's alright. My advice is to think of a twist like mine at the end was CLICK and you have to think about it. That one was kind of stupid because it's so boring a not scary. Try again.
Jan 14, 2009 Rating
Okay story by: XxkenziexX
i personally thought the story was funny. over-protective boyfriend, much? lol sorry, but that was what went through my head at the end
Dec 06, 2008 Rating
Awesome by: Anonymous
I thought it was cool about the details.
Oct 27, 2008 Rating
Amazing! by: Carrie
Hey Jess I said I would comment so here goes... Amazing! I thought it was really well put and has sent shivers up my spine! You can check out the rest of my stories if you want - "sleep - walking" (scary), "saved by prayer" (true) and "baby - sitting (funny).
Oct 19, 2008 Rating
Nice, but could have tried harder. by: Anonymous
It could have been a very nice story, but some things were not right. You could have, for instance, started the story by captivating the readers, but otherwise it was nice.
