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Oct 11, 2009
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AWesome
by: Anonymous

i thought that one was very cool!

Oct 02, 2009
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yeah
by: Anonymous

great, freaky story but needs more detail! you have to build up suspence befor you get to the killing! :]

Sep 21, 2009
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Excuse me!
by: Jessica W

Whoever this "jessica" is who said her story had a twist on the end saying "Click" if you are trying to say you wrote the story called "wrong number" THAT WAS ACTUALLY MINE! I WROTE THAT STORY WITH THAT TURN OF EVENT! HOW DARE YOU CLAIM MY WORK AS YOUR OWN!
P.S if you are TRULY talking of a different story I will apologies, but I HATE people who pass of my work as theirs!

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Can someone confirm this?

Phil G

May 22, 2009
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ALRIGHT
by: Anonymous

i have to admit it as pretty scary and such

Feb 20, 2009
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Awesome
by: Anonymous

That was very cool! Chills were running up and down my spine!

Feb 01, 2009
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Huh?
by: jessica

I guess it's alright. My advice is to think of a twist like mine at the end was CLICK and you have to think about it. That one was kind of stupid because it's so boring a not scary. Try again.

Jan 14, 2009
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Okay story
by: XxkenziexX

i personally thought the story was funny. over-protective boyfriend, much? lol
sorry, but that was what went through my head at the end

Dec 06, 2008
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Awesome
by: Anonymous

I thought it was cool about the details.

Oct 27, 2008
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Amazing!
by: Carrie

Hey Jess I said I would comment so here goes... Amazing! I thought it was really well put and has sent shivers up my spine! You can check out the rest of my stories if you want - "sleep - walking" (scary), "saved by prayer" (true) and "baby - sitting (funny).

Oct 19, 2008
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Nice, but could have tried harder.
by: Anonymous

It could have been a very nice story, but some things were not right. You could have, for instance, started the story by captivating the readers, but otherwise it was nice.

Oct 06, 2008
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Alright
by: Anonymous

That story had a lot of detail.

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