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Nov 15, 2009
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that was great
by: lauren gravell

I might put them all togther and make a book of them everyone stories are gud so i might put them all together and mabye they could be pubblished.

I got news for you. They were submitted to this site and are the property of this site with copyright being in the hands of the authors. You are not permitted to extract copies for your own use. Copyright protection is not a joke!
Phil G.

Jul 04, 2009
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oh wow...
by: Marie

that was really freaky. good job! im still looking behind my shoulders!!

May 29, 2009
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omg!!
by: Anna

wow this story was amazing!!!! awsome awsome awsome job!!! sheesh...to bad in live in california....im TOTALLY locking my door tonite!!! hey did u write any more stories?? if u did, i'd LUV to hear them...this was sooo awsome!!! if u wanna check out one of my stories (Room 113) thatd be awsome!! (U dont have to though) well anyways, i loved ur story and i dont think ill be getting any sleep at all tonite!! lolz!!

May 29, 2009
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ooooh
by: Anonymous

ooooh i dont feel good that was disgusting but scary...very good...!!

Apr 10, 2009
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wow...
by: athena

i'm out of breath...

i'm looking over my sholder...

THAT FREAKED ME OUT...!

love your stories...

Mar 28, 2009
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Hi
by: Lynn

Victoria, GREAT story! I was so scared, I turned white as a ghost- maybe whiter! And Carrie, you have great stories, too!

Oh, and, PhilG, if you see any stories by Lynn
can you publish them (on this website) please??

Lynn: I am so behind. My family has just moved, so my editing has suffered greatly. Please be patient. If the stories are a good effort, I will publish them gladly, someday.

Jun 18, 2008
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Hey
by: Carrie

Hey victoria! carrie here. I'm also 11 and would love to make a website! If i did i would put all your stories on it!!! Wow! I hope you put your book on "funny stories" so i can read it! you will be a great author when you grow up!!! My cousin can make websites but i don't have a clue!!
Have you any other stories on the net???!!! I would LOVE to read them!!!!!!!!!!
Bye for now,
Caz x

Jun 10, 2008
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Thanx Carrie
by: Victoria

Thanx Carrie! I'll check it out right now! Hold on while I open a tab... Ok I read it! WOW!!! That was really good! It made me want to read on! And I didn't see any errors, at all! Everyone, read "Sleep walking" by Carrie! (If you press Ctrl F on the keyboard, you can just type in what you want to find on a web page, and it will find it for you!!!) Since I'm only 11, it would be the best thing if I could ACTUALLY PUBLISH a book. Oh, and Carrie, I wish your story kept going, it was AWESOME!!! :) And if 101 ways to annoy your parents doesn't get published, I'll keep trying! Because that's what future authors do! Keep trying. I wish I could copy and paste 101 ways to annoy your parents on this comment, so you could read it. But it has over 3000 characters, so I can't. But maybe I could put it on "funny stories"... Well, I'll make you all a deal. If it doesn't get published, I'll copy and paste it on "funny stories". Oh, and by the way. Just so people aren't confused... When I say "published", I mean REAL book, not publish on this website. My dad is making a website for his tile company, it's not done yet, but I promised I would help him make it. It's not on yet, but maybe he would let ME make a website!!!That would rock! I would put ALL my stories on there!

Bye my homiez

Jun 08, 2008
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Thanx
by: Carrie

Hey Vicky thanks for the publicity! Can't wait to read your new story! Check out Sleep-walking also by me!! I hope your book gets published!!!
From you know who x

May 31, 2008
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Thanx!
by: Victoria, again, again, again...

Thank you everyone for the comments! I'm about to write a new story and thanks for all giving me advice on Bone Dry Killer. I'll take a look at revenge write now! Hold on a sec while I open a new tab... I read revenge and left a comment! That was good. Everyone out there, read Revenge by Carrie! It's really good! :) I'm going to write a new story now called "bloody Barbie" but who knows if they will publish it. I just sent a book on 101 ways to annoy your parents to scholastic. Maybe it will become a real book! :)
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If it's good, appropriate, and I don't have to do a lot of editing, I'll publish it. (PhilG)

May 28, 2008
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Hey!
by: Anonymous

Thanks for the great comment! I wish more people would comment me! You got any more stories Vicky?! I would love to here them!!

HEY PEOPLE COMMENT "REVENGE"!

From You Know Who.
xo

May 19, 2008
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Cool story!
by: Caz

Hey Vicky! Your story was cool. It give me shivers. Sorry you didn't like it E.L.... Why don't you check out "Revenge" by me!! I'd really like your advice on it...

May 06, 2008
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The author of BONE DRY KILLer
by: Victoria, again, again

Thanx, Well Wisher! (commenting person below) You no, I've always wanted to be an author. I'm writing a novel, so far, its 23 pages long! P.S. If you go to TRUE STORIES, and click on the 1 that says "I'm so glad my dads alive!" By hana (it should be the 2nd 1) thats my friend Hana, it's so sad about her dad! My friends and I at Liberty Junior High comment here, like Briana Clark! She rocks!

If you want to be an author, be careful with your capitalization (proper names and I), don't over use !!!!!! Don't concatenate using Internet speak u u u, Your spelling must always be perfect, 'me and my frnds' just won't cut it for grammar. And, by the way, 'P.S.' means Post Scriptum as in after the writing. You will be challenged when throwing around terms without using them, in this case, in the right place or context.

Your webmaster... PhilG

PS: I have to edit comments as well.

Apr 22, 2008
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Wow!
by: A Well Wisher

Wow! What Can I Say? That was a real good read but gory and disgusting!

Apr 05, 2008
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It's me, the author... again
by: Victoria, again

Hey everyone. Leave some comments. Nobody besides me, my dad, and some kid called E.L. have left a comment. And Bone Dry Killer has been up for like, half a year. Please Please, Please leave a comment.

Feb 26, 2008
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Love
by: Victoria

Now, yes, I am Victoria who wrote bone dry killer, and I must say two things; One, whoever E.L. is, yeah, thanks for the lousy comment. Two, The comment titled "Love! From Daddy!" Yeah, that really WAS my dad!

Feb 12, 2008
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rubbish
by: e.l

rubbish not even scary

Feb 11, 2008
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love
by: Daddy

Great job VIcky -T -Orea !!

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