Hey my name is Bella too so I Really loved this story but ummm where is the ending? I mean it was starting to get interested, so maybe you could do this. Write another part named "bella part 2".
May 11, 2010 Rating
Good...but no ending by: Anonymous
where's the ending we need an ending to know what happened
Apr 02, 2010 Rating
no ending by: nerd at three oclock
i thought it was ok but wheres the ending...?
p.s dried up water is nothing
Oct 11, 2009 Rating
weird by: bella
my name is bella too haaha how funny,..i dont get it bella is dead and the liltle girl is dead, goes vs. goes why was going up stair a big mistake if bella is dead alredy what is a goes ganna do to a goes??
Oct 02, 2009 Rating
great! by: Anonymous
awesome story but i MUST see a bella part 2!!!
Jul 16, 2009 Rating
o k by: Confused
WERES THE ENDING? It was totaly getting good but the ending was missing! If there IS and ending tell us!!!!
Jun 10, 2009 Rating
ddd by: sugarlips
it was good but like there should be more to it because it was starting to get interesting
Mar 19, 2009 Rating
wondering by: author of i'm coming up the stairs
what happens? why was it her big mistake? if there is another story, what happens?
Feb 10, 2009 Rating
Whoa by: Anonymous
That was a really good story but WHERE IS THE REST OF THE STORY hahaha!
I thought there was more to it. It was getting really good.
I mean it got to me I would have NEVER thoguht the main character would be dead....wicked lol.
Nov 15, 2008 Rating
I LOVE IT by: sophie
I'm the one who wrote hide and seek and also Cry of the dead. Read them please:) Also I love this! I wish I wrote it!! Great writing! creepy but awesome!
