The short story is an attempt to depict the activities of American kids during the weekend. The boys' mindset towards innovative thinking is the theme of the story. Whether win or defeat, the game should be taken as sportive and congratulate to the winner.
Apr 15, 2008 Rating
Good Plot by: Vishalakshi
I would like to comment on the story as follows. 1) Plot is good 2) Situation needs detailed explanation. 3) Dialog should be improved. 4) Though story is not effective, but receives the attention of kids.
Apr 15, 2008 Rating
Excellent Idea by: Ananya Talikoti
The dialog seem very unnatural for American kids. Try using informal dialog. Over all it is a good story. -Ananya T. Age-12 years, Apex-NC-USA
