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Apr 15, 2008
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Innovative Thinking
by: Anonymous

The short story is an attempt to depict the activities of American kids during the weekend. The boys' mindset towards innovative thinking is the theme of the story. Whether win or defeat, the game should be taken as sportive and congratulate to the winner.

Apr 15, 2008
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Good Plot
by: Vishalakshi

I would like to comment on the story as follows.
1) Plot is good
2) Situation needs detailed explanation.
3) Dialog should be improved.
4) Though story is not effective, but receives the attention of kids.

Apr 15, 2008
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Excellent Idea
by: Ananya Talikoti

The dialog seem very unnatural for American kids. Try using informal dialog. Over all it is a good story.
-Ananya T.
Age-12 years,
Apex-NC-USA

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