There are gramatical and spelling errors throughout the entire story. Absolutely horrible.
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Aug 03, 2009 Rating
um by: Pokaface
how do u guys not get this? the babysitter was obviously the creepy guy its not THAT complicated! o ya and chelsea i absolutely <3 it!!! fantabulous job
Jul 15, 2009 Rating
THE BEST by: Anonymous
WOW, THAT WAS GOOD! BUT i HAVE A QUESTiON; WAS THE MAN iN THE MiRROR SUPPOSED TO BE THE BABY'S FATHER? i NOTiCE HOW EVERY TiME THE MOM CALLED, THE DAD WAS NEVER MENTiONED...
Jul 14, 2009 Rating
Creepy by: Vanessa
THIS WAS SO CREEPY You THINK OF GOOD STORIES CHEALSEA. if ther was a mirror that means the creepy guy was...actully....IN the house or....the creepy guy was the BABYSITTER! ok whatever it is it is CREEPY .
Jul 06, 2009 Rating
Amazing! by: Anonymous
Wow that was an awesome story!! It was really scary and at the end i looked behind me to see if anybody was there! The mirror thing WAS really scary. Nice job!
