hhhmm, story was okay i guess. im not really a fan of the ending. i want my people to actually DIE at the end of a story...or at least not end up safe in a hospital. when i read the title i expected her to be home alone. it was pretty good though. always room for improvement...
Jul 14, 2009 Rating
Hurts by: Vanessa
This is REALLY creepy. If this happened to me and my friend would by like that i would TOTALLY CREEP OUT but Kayley[ forgot her name i think its kayley] should have stayed with her. My stomach is starting to hurt.
Jul 03, 2009 Rating
Bravo! by: Edi C.
Bravo! That was great! Well done! You have a truly amazing writing ability! Keep up the good work!
Jun 08, 2009 Rating
Answers to questions by: Melony Tworth
Yes and no, the guy was there and he wasn't there. The shadow was the only thing there, but the guy himself was not. Kayley did get hurt, that was why she was in the hospital. If you have anymore questions i'll be happy to answer them. -M.T.
Jun 08, 2009 Rating
hmm by: Anonymous
im a little confused it was an awsome story, but what happened??? was the guy really there and did he really hurt kayley and what happened? please write back
Feb 25, 2009 Rating
oh! by: mrtw
i don't like the end... but it was a very nice tale.
