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Mar 19, 2008
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Lame
by: Anonymous

This is not scary at all.

Oct 31, 2007
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Awesome
by: Anonymous

It was scary, but at the end it was just his parents!

Oct 30, 2007
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yahoo
by: Anonymous

cool

Oct 29, 2007
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Constructive Criticism
by: The Storyafier.... or something

I think this story was very good! The only thing I would change is to make it clear on whether the light that he was seeing was his family all along, or if it was some creepy ghost, then his family showed up... good job!

Oct 05, 2007
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it was ok
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this story was short, i like short stories longer than that. It was ok. But when i read stories i get an image in my head, with yours i didn't.

Oct 02, 2007
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Nice
by: Anonymous

Your story was boring!

Aug 20, 2007
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That was alien to me
by: Donny

Good job Jeremy. I liked the focus diverted to the Two Sisters. I hope you don't have nightmares.

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