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Dec 03, 2011
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Sorry, Phil
by: Georgia Mann

my mum was never found, but I wanted a happy ending. sorry sorry sorry!

Dec 04, 2011
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Georgia on my mind
by: Anonymous

Georgia,

I know something went wrong, but think how we can fix it. It isn't good for the readers if it wastes their time, happy ending or not.

Re-read it, as I said, and come up with a plot twist or change that can make some sense, then explain it to me as a Comment, and I'll try to fix it. Otherwise I may have to take the story down.

Phil G.

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