this story rocks! good job! i think my heart skipped a beat!
Jul 16, 2009 Rating
awesome by: Anonymous
really great job! really scary. Keep writing more & more & more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :)
Jul 05, 2009 Rating
whoa.. by: Marie
that was really good!!!! lol! like she finally feels comfortable and then the dad kills her to bring her with him! that was insane and amazing at the same time!! wow! good job! write more!
Jun 21, 2009 Rating
OMGosh by: Anonymous
this is so scary!
Jun 14, 2009 Rating
good job by: Anonymous
ughhhhhhhhh scary!!!!
this story is what this site is all about. alot of people write extremely stupid nonscary to short copyrighted stories but this one was great! keep up the amazing work!
