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May 14, 2011
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great
by: lottie

great story sent chills up my spine.

Jan 01, 2011
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of course its not true
by: writer of story

this isnt true obviously, I did the shadow part to add a sense of horror to the end thats all.

Oct 30, 2010
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of course this isnt true
by: writer of this story

Oh yea, Of course it isn't true! That would be horrible if this were true.

Oct 30, 2010
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It ain't true
by: Hiya

Good story but it ain't true and its not true i think of course but scary story

Oct 13, 2010
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thanks
by: the writer of this

Thanks guys!!

Oct 13, 2010
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wow
by: 17B-Ball_Queen17

u scared me! that would scare the heck out of me wowowwowowowow! good one!

Oct 11, 2010
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Great job
by: Anonymous

I thought this was really good! Good job!

Mar 23, 2011
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scary!!
by: bibble

ohh..... scary love it!!!!

Dec 29, 2010
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not true story
by: love ya

if this was a true story how did u survived when the shadow went around u?


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